Below you will find all the news stories that I received by noon on Monday. They have been checked in, and cursorily read, but are not graded. I'll get to that part on Tuesday. As stated on the blog everyday since January 6, all news stories were due by midnight Sunday. If I missed yours, let me know. They are now worth only 50 points. Please remember that the marking period will end for us next Monday, at which point the rest of the week is exams. I will be downtown grading. Next Monday, if there is still anything I or you have missed, please plan on showing me in class.
As well, all previously received assignments have been put in the grade book. Check!
In class today: please read over the news stories. Select 8 of the stories that particularly caught your attention. Write the headline, followed by a positive, well-articulated comment. Post these....with your name, if you intend to get credit- at the end of the blog. I suggest you create a word document, and then post one time. Do not send them to me! These are due at the end of class today, with the exception of those who receive extended time.
There is no additional class time for the news unit.
New unit tomorrow: satire, because your pen shall heal, not hurt. (paraphrased from LL Montgomery)
There is no additional class time for the news unit.
New unit tomorrow: satire, because your pen shall heal, not hurt. (paraphrased from LL Montgomery)
Statistics and Facts about Child Abuse in the U.S.
By Adrianna
Lester
Statics say that over the past 10 years’ children
in America are victims of abuse and killed in their own homes by their own
family members. It is estimated that more than 1,000 children are abused and
neglected in Monroe County each year. Right here! Where we live. What can we do
as a country and as a community to stop this madness? We often look over
situations like these, leaving it to the “professionals”, known as Child Protection
Services(CPSs) but; What about all those cases out there that haven’t been
solved? What about all the children that are still victims of abuse? Do we
still leave this the professionals?
Child protection services, job is to promote safety and the well-being
of children, yet there are still children in our very own community being
punished for no apparent reason.
I understand that
this is a big community and there aren’t a lot of social workers; but what I don’t
understand is why the children weren’t taken out of the situation in the
beginning in the beginning.
Everyone deserves a second chance; I get
that, but why not take the child away and let their parent or guardian get some
help instead of letting the child stay in the situation. Are we as a community
speaking up? Are child protection services really doing their job?
6 Children Found Living in Filth and Gas
by Adrianna
Lester
6 children were found in their home
on Bay Mount street at 10:25 Thursday morning by their neighbor, Mrs. Anderson
due to a foul smell of gas. When Mrs. Anderson removed, the children form the
house she contacted the children’s parents and police. When the police arrived
to the scene, they said that the smell was so putent that you can smell it
inside the car. Mrs. Anderson said,
“when I walked into the house the smell of gas was so strong. The house was
just filthy and the children were laying in front of the television not really
recognizing what the smell was, no parent or adult was in the house.” Each of
the children were all under the age of 10.
As the police were investigating the scene they saw that the windows
were broken out of the children’s window’s and the children were sleeping on
mattresses on the floor without the proper bedding. Officer Milting said, “it
is horrific to see children living in this kind of predicament, I just don’t
understand why CPSs hasn’t taken these children, if it were up to me the
parents would be in jail and given no visitation to their children”. The
children were taken to Strong Memorial Hospital, where they were checked for
signs of any Natural gas poisoning. Thankfully the children were fine in that
sense, but bruises were found on the children. The
hospital notified CPSs about the situation. Officials say that CPSs already
knew what was going on and they were notified several different times, but they
didn’t really do anything about the situation. When the children were taken the
first time they were taken to their grandmother, but they ended up being with
their mother again. The Police and Child protection services are still trying
to get in contact with the parents.
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Senioritis Hurts High School Seniors
Growing use of social media hinders
senior focus
Katherine Scardino
The epidemic of
senioritis in high school students is increasing as social media competes for
teenage attention.
Senioritis is a
commonly used term to describe a lack of motivation in high school seniors. As
students finish their college applications they often lose the determination to
continue to do well in school.
While senioritis
may seem harmless enough, it is important to remember that most U.S. colleges
still use mid and end-year reports. For students like local high school senior
Frieda Jones, who “[doesn’t] even pretend to do classwork anymore”, this can
have serious consequences. A poor report can cause an institution to rescind
college acceptance, or even financial aid.
For-profit
student counseling organization: IvyWise, informs students that colleges “like
to see an upward grade trend”. The tendency of seniors afflicted with
senioritis to prioritize social media over school work can wreak havoc on this
trend.
The prevalence
of smart phones and social media is an increasingly large barrier to education.
“ I have way more focus on my phone than class anyway”, said high school senior
Carolyn Blake. She went on to explain that many of her peers share her
feelings.
Students feel an
increased disregard for school rules in their final year. Even though most
schools prohibit phone use, seniors are often undeterred from checking social
media throughout the day. One local senior, who wishes to remain anonymous,
said “I don’t really pay attention to school policy this year. I don’t care
enough to follow dress code, passes are irrelevant, and I have my phone out in
class everyday”.
Despite this
newfound focus on senioritis, it doesn’t look like there will be a cure anytime
soon.
Years of Misery, or amusement?
Middle school: 3 years of many emotions,lessons
By Nuria Osman, published: January 13, 2017
Strong Axe colon that stings your nose hair, Manual pencil sharpeners in class that destroy knuckles, cheesy school dances and embarrassing yearbook photos pretty much sum up life as a middle schooler. As awkward middle school has been for most people, it’s a time in your life that will most likely sit in the back of your memory no matter how hard you try to forget it. Middle school has a significant impact on most people. Although life as a middle schooler has always been known as a time period of confusion and complication, as you start to discover who you yj7uare, it can also be a time of adventure and excitement as you grow older and run into many kinds of people and friend groups. “ My life as a middle schooler isn’t your average, I have learned a lot during my middle school years, I learned that friends aren’t always your friends, and most importantly how to be a leader and not a follower.” said former middle school student, Maria Morales. It’s clear that middle school has helped shape Maria to become the person that she is today. Her personal experiences in middle school have taught her many life lessons that she still carries today. Often, current and former middle school students have a different description of middle school experiences. “ As a current middle schooler, life is good. I’m learning a lot academically, while also having fun” said school #58 8th grader, Aden Osman.
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Racist or not?
In the past few years, a lot has been made of racial logos and team namesakes.
By: Joshua Pettway
In recent years many natives have been speaking out on attitudes toward namesakes and logos such as Washington Redskins, Cleveland Indians, Chicago Blackhawks, Florida State Seminoles et cetera. They’ve recently come up more by the younger generations of native american descent, some people have found it strange that most of these claims have most notably come up when these teams began losing. I wanted to know if these namesakes and team logos were actually considered racist or not.
Cinnamon a woman of native american descent I asked if she found these names and logos to be disrespectful, degrading or racist. “I don’t like the names themselves nor the logos, I do find them racist degrading and disrespectful,” she said. Why do they feel that way for you? “They over exaggerate stereotypes, the indians with the pure read face or the name itself, we’re not indians were native americans, the Redskins, like were not red skin at all our skin tone is just like others,” she said. In a poll by the washington post they tested native americans attitude toward the redskins name and there wasn’t a single poll were people felt over 20% that the name was offensive or over 25% that felt the name was disrespectful. Which makes you question are these namesakes and logos racist or not, to a small few they may racist but not to the majority.
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Singer Breaks Silence
Mariah Carey’s Team Shuts Down New Year’s Eve Rumors
Katherine Fuss
Mariah Carey and her management team explain what truly happened that prevented her New Year’s Eve performance from going as planned.
The first misconception is that Carey skipped her sound check, and the checking the sound equipment properly. Her manager, Stella Bulochnikov, explained that is incorrect, and that Carey was present the whole time. She did have a dance stand in, but she was off to the side to do the sound check. The sound came through choppy, but she was assured by the technical crew that it would work fine for her performance.
She later had an interview with Ryan Seacrest, and it was clear she was still having sound trouble. It was coming through choppy, but again, she was reassured that it would be working before her performance.
Carey was still having problems minutes before her performance, despite receiving a new mic pack. She was again told that once she got on stage it would be fine, but even when they went live she could not hear anything.
Out of frustration, she took the ear piece out, in attempt to hear the track and sing along. Unfortunately, it was drowned out by the New York City crowd and she was left unable to hear anything.
It was also rumored that she was lip synching, but Bulochnikov shut that rumor down by explaining that singing to a track, what Carey and many other performers do, is completely different from lip synching.
Bulochnikov was also ‘disgusted’ by the fact that Carey and her team had not received a formal apology from Dick Clark Productions, and hinted to the idea of sabotage by saying, “We live in this viral world where anybody will do anything for a viral moment.”
Carey showed her readiness to move past the whole thing as she tweeted “Sh*t happens. Have a happy and healthy new year everybody! Here's to making more headlines in 2017.”
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The Truth of Senior Year:
What No One Tells You About Your Senior Year
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Men and women fashion, are you in or out?
Statistics Shows Pro and Cons Of Attending School and Having A Job
By Jose Alicea
More and more college and high school students are maintaining a job while attending school. Research has
How diverse is the business world?
Life of a Classical Percussionist in Today’s World:
The day to day struggles between auditions, rejection, and PRACTICE
Bulling may still be a trend, but losing a loved one isn't, the family of a Texas teen share their story
November 30th Texas City teen Brandy Vela kills herself after being bullied on social media because of her weight.
NOTE: whoever wrote the following, please identify
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Future Technology Now
Making the choice to understand your siblings’ perspectives is one of the highest forms of respect you can ever offer them. While there may come a time when you have to respect them from a distance, your brothers and sisters are some of the greatest teachers you will ever have. The lessons you learn from them now will ensure you and your family can have a lifetime filled with happy memories and peaceful holidays for years to come.
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Most
of the time victims send to Death because of the Bullies
by Ler Tha Tau
While
bullying in school remains a serious issue, many students are committed
suicides. On Friday, Jan 13th 2017, James Tozer, who wrote the article talking
about 11 years old boy who overdose of painkillers after other student in
school picked on him. He said “ A distraught mother has claimed that her
11-year-old son was driven to suicide by bullies at his school.” This kind of
situation like bullies, not only affects the victims but also affects their
love ones, and people who cares. James also said “ On the day of his death, he
had got off the school bus to escape the bullies. Miss Thompson said she had
spoken to Thomas's teachers, but the school claimed the only reported incident
had been at a bus stop and involved children from another school.” And
"There is absolutely no record of the child reporting bullying within the
school. We saw no evidence of Thomas being treated differently by other
pupils,"Wallasey School Headmaster Martin Pope said. “Extremely
intelligent boy; the whole school has been deeply shocked and saddened by
Thomas's death."
This article contains some of the facts and statistics that we
have found to make the biggest impact on how adults and parents come to realize
bullying as a problem not only in their community but throughout the entire
country as well.
Even though bullying has been
around for many years and isn’t likely to end any time soon, it isn’t something
that should be ignored.
The more people who learn how to handle bullying, the less of an impact
it will have on everyone, especially those who are often the victims of bullying.
The problem with many bullying situations is too many people are unwilling to
step up and take action against the person who is performing the bullying
actions.
Many schools today respond to bullying, or other types of school violence,
with reactive measures. However, having metal detectors or surveillance cameras
or hiring police to patrol the halls has no real positive results. Now,
you can see United States has less Bullying in school, workplaces or else.
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Mariah Carey’s Team Shuts Down New Year’s Eve Rumors
Katherine Fuss
Mariah Carey and her management team explain what truly happened that prevented her New Year’s Eve performance from going as planned.
The first misconception is that Carey skipped her sound check, and the checking the sound equipment properly. Her manager, Stella Bulochnikov, explained that is incorrect, and that Carey was present the whole time. She did have a dance stand in, but she was off to the side to do the sound check. The sound came through choppy, but she was assured by the technical crew that it would work fine for her performance.
She later had an interview with Ryan Seacrest, and it was clear she was still having sound trouble. It was coming through choppy, but again, she was reassured that it would be working before her performance.
Carey was still having problems minutes before her performance, despite receiving a new mic pack. She was again told that once she got on stage it would be fine, but even when they went live she could not hear anything.
Out of frustration, she took the ear piece out, in attempt to hear the track and sing along. Unfortunately, it was drowned out by the New York City crowd and she was left unable to hear anything.
It was also rumored that she was lip synching, but Bulochnikov shut that rumor down by explaining that singing to a track, what Carey and many other performers do, is completely different from lip synching.
Bulochnikov was also ‘disgusted’ by the fact that Carey and her team had not received a formal apology from Dick Clark Productions, and hinted to the idea of sabotage by saying, “We live in this viral world where anybody will do anything for a viral moment.”
Carey showed her readiness to move past the whole thing as she tweeted “Sh*t happens. Have a happy and healthy new year everybody! Here's to making more headlines in 2017.”
The Truth of Senior Year:
What No One Tells You About Your Senior Year
by Tonyeisha Brown
Senior year of high school can be much more stress and much more in general than a person leads you to
believe. In reality, your senior year can be economically and mentally frustrating. Getting ready to pay for
all of senior year’s invaluable treasures can be quite expensive such as a yearbook, prom, etc. Also, if you
are going to college, you stress about how you are going to pay for it and where you are going to go. Senior
year can be frustrating and fearful when getting ready for the next step. The college process frustrates you,
filling out scholarships, the reality of school work. Another frustrating factor is the workload of senior year
when you have to keep up with schoolwork, college deadlines, and a job. Additionally, “High expectations
when things are going wrong can be frustrating ” said Keoni Smith, a senior a School of the Arts.
Although in reality, senior year is a lot to keep up with; however, senior year does have its benefits. You get to
make more friends, become connected even more with peers you wouldn’t have thought you would be friends
with. I asked a student how is the reality of his social life of senior year. The response I got was a little unexpected.
“Making friends who I would have never thought that I would be friends with. I can see and identify the change in
the peers that I hang around” said Rashid Pendleton, a School of the Arts’ High School senior. Overall, the truth of
senior year is that “your grades still matters… senioritis will hit--[so] fight it...you will be busy, so stay organized...
it'll be exciting--and emotional,” it will go quick, pay attention to your deadlines. Yes, it is much more to expect
than what you are normally told, but you will get through it.
Senior year of high school can be much more stress and much more in general than a person leads you to
believe. In reality, your senior year can be economically and mentally frustrating. Getting ready to pay for
all of senior year’s invaluable treasures can be quite expensive such as a yearbook, prom, etc. Also, if you
are going to college, you stress about how you are going to pay for it and where you are going to go. Senior
year can be frustrating and fearful when getting ready for the next step. The college process frustrates you,
filling out scholarships, the reality of school work. Another frustrating factor is the workload of senior year
when you have to keep up with schoolwork, college deadlines, and a job. Additionally, “High expectations
when things are going wrong can be frustrating ” said Keoni Smith, a senior a School of the Arts.
Although in reality, senior year is a lot to keep up with; however, senior year does have its benefits. You get to
make more friends, become connected even more with peers you wouldn’t have thought you would be friends
with. I asked a student how is the reality of his social life of senior year. The response I got was a little unexpected.
“Making friends who I would have never thought that I would be friends with. I can see and identify the change in
the peers that I hang around” said Rashid Pendleton, a School of the Arts’ High School senior. Overall, the truth of
senior year is that “your grades still matters… senioritis will hit--[so] fight it...you will be busy, so stay organized...
it'll be exciting--and emotional,” it will go quick, pay attention to your deadlines. Yes, it is much more to expect
than what you are normally told, but you will get through it.
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Men and women fashion, are you in or out?
by Steven Colson
Fashion has changed over the last couple of decades especially male and female clothing. Nowadays clothes
Fashion has changed over the last couple of decades especially male and female clothing. Nowadays clothes
has no gender. You're starting to a a similarity between the clothes. Whether it's the color or the style, guess
you can't turn it down. The brand UGGS were simply female shoes at first then started making men boots as
well and what do you know there most popular in 2016-2017. Same with Jordan's or as the younger crowd
says Jay’s. Those shoes are usually worn by men who play basketball but now women are wearing them creating
such a bold fashion statement.
The 90’s are coming back into fashion. For women it's the scrunchies, high waisted pants and shorts and a lot of
The 90’s are coming back into fashion. For women it's the scrunchies, high waisted pants and shorts and a lot of
cool colors. For men there's the color block windbreaker 90’s related cartoons or teenage shows such as All that ,
saved by the bell. Not just shows but bands and singers like David Bowie , gunz and roses and Metallica. For the
both are lighter colors in pinks and blues also acid wash jeans and baggy jeans.
To find out more about what's in and the similarities I interviewed a high school student to get her opinion about
To find out more about what's in and the similarities I interviewed a high school student to get her opinion about
the matter. She said “what's in is more of the distressed look”. Which is more of the ripped up stuff such as ripped
shirt and bleach stained shirts. I asked “do you see any similarities between the gender fashion?” She replied with
“yes such as the styles like the distressed and fabrics and what's on the clothes. Also the colors more men are
wearing the coral , salmon and light pink kind of colors.” I thanked her and concluded the interview
Check your closet see if you have the latest fashion trend just waiting around for you to wear
Check your closet see if you have the latest fashion trend just waiting around for you to wear
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The Truth Behind It All
Reasons why college might be right or wrong for you
By: Rashi'd Pendleton
College presents pros and cons to those who decide to spend their years after high school drowned in school work.
In recent years college has become more popular than ever leading more students to think of the possibilities
Reasons why college might be right or wrong for you
By: Rashi'd Pendleton
College presents pros and cons to those who decide to spend their years after high school drowned in school work.
In recent years college has become more popular than ever leading more students to think of the possibilities
that can come with obtaining some form of degree. The income of a graduate student always finds its way to the
top of the list of reasons for going to college. On average, a college graduate student makes 30,000 more a year
and over 500,000 in a lifetime than a high school graduate. In the 2012 edition of the Forbes list, more than 50%
of the Americans listed were college graduates.
The recessions in 2008 and 2010 increased the requirement of jobs in America. Jobs only requiring some college
The recessions in 2008 and 2010 increased the requirement of jobs in America. Jobs only requiring some college
education or an associate’s degree fell by 5.6 million. According to Georgetown University in 2018, approximately
63% of jobs will require a college education.
Student loan debt seems to be one thing a lot of college students cannot avoid with the average debt being
Student loan debt seems to be one thing a lot of college students cannot avoid with the average debt being
$20,326 in 2012. 10% of the graduate population is $40,000 in debt and 1% is $100,000 in debt. The amount of
money a student owes can lead to the delay of having financial stability and going to college doesn’t always
guarantee that you’ll find a job. According to the Bureau of Labor projected 30 fastest growing jobs between
2010 and 2022, five do not require a high school diploma, and nine require a high school diploma.
College life isn’t always filled with unforgettable parties and friendships. “The competition for grades, the need
College life isn’t always filled with unforgettable parties and friendships. “The competition for grades, the need
to perform, relationships, fear of AIDS, career choice and many other aspects of the college environment cause
stress” said The University of Florida’s Counseling & Wellness center.
Despite the cons of going to college, the numbers of students enrolling increases each year. Some of the students
Despite the cons of going to college, the numbers of students enrolling increases each year. Some of the students
go off to be well known Americans in society and other falls just beneath their expectations; either way, college is
always going to be around.
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Statistics Shows Pro and Cons Of Attending School and Having A Job
By Jose Alicea
More and more college and high school students are maintaining a job while attending school. Research has
shown while it could be a very helpful for many students it also could show a negative effect in grades. Studies
show that students who work past the intended amount which usually is 15 to 20 hours, show a dip in their grades
the cause usually having to do with time management skills. On the other hand, you have situations where students not only have a way to make money but they also learn life skills in these jobs that could help one in the future.
.I spoke to students who attend school while having a job and frequent answers were about time management skills and the stress that comes along. “ A lot of stress, and if you do not manage your time well, you will get behind ” said Jancel.
More and more students are realizing college is not cheap, and having a job early can help save some of the
.I spoke to students who attend school while having a job and frequent answers were about time management skills and the stress that comes along. “ A lot of stress, and if you do not manage your time well, you will get behind ” said Jancel.
More and more students are realizing college is not cheap, and having a job early can help save some of the
headache of having to pay off students loans and such. It all comes down to the individual student and their
situation. A college student in dire need of money might not have a choice and having a part time job is their
way while a high school student who already participates in many extracurricular activities might be better off
holding off on having a job at the moment.
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Integration of Humans, Technology
Technology Impacted Lives Since Wheel
By Keoni Smith
Inventions advanced the way tasks can be completed, with ease and speed that humans desire more of.
Humans and technology have evolved simultaneously for some time; the wheel lead to wagons, trains, and cars
Technology Impacted Lives Since Wheel
By Keoni Smith
Inventions advanced the way tasks can be completed, with ease and speed that humans desire more of.
Humans and technology have evolved simultaneously for some time; the wheel lead to wagons, trains, and cars
to make transportation a breeze, and early computing resulted in wireless phones, smartphones, and the push
a fully digital world.
Technology surrounds society entirely today, constantly leaving an impact on everyday lives.
Some of these impacts are positive, as leaving the house to scavenge for information isn’t always ideal. “The
Technology surrounds society entirely today, constantly leaving an impact on everyday lives.
Some of these impacts are positive, as leaving the house to scavenge for information isn’t always ideal. “The
internet can be accessed quickly to look up information such as a doctor's number,” Christine Smith said.
Technology has its drawbacks that bring a great deal of controversy as well. Whether it would be the questioning
Technology has its drawbacks that bring a great deal of controversy as well. Whether it would be the questioning
of the President-elect’s Twitter posts, or the advanced computer hacking that has leaked confidential information,
chnology causes some harm.
Although technology is the center of hot button topics as a result, technological breakthroughs in recent years
Although technology is the center of hot button topics as a result, technological breakthroughs in recent years
suggest further integration and coexistence of technology and humans.
Transhumanism allows for natural human limitations to be surpassed through technology. The development of
Transhumanism allows for natural human limitations to be surpassed through technology. The development of
smart devices such as Google’s self-driving car, Waymo, also sets a foundation for humans and robots to share
tasks.
The growing role of technology potentially rivals humans. “Things like physical interaction, reading, and listening
The growing role of technology potentially rivals humans. “Things like physical interaction, reading, and listening
to music can be done on media devices. Although this is convenient, it takes away the value of these things that
can be done on our own. This is problematic as it can actually cause establishments like libraries, theaters, and much
more to close,” Caroline Smith said.
Despite its cons, companies continue to develop smart technologies to enhance the lives and efficiency of human
Despite its cons, companies continue to develop smart technologies to enhance the lives and efficiency of human
lives, some of which will be trends, and others leaving a monumental impact such as the wheel that started it all.
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How diverse is the business world?
Taijanah Jackson
With there being billions of people in the world and millions in the united states. So how diverse is the business
With there being billions of people in the world and millions in the united states. So how diverse is the business
world? Not only when it comes to skin color but when it comes to sexual orientation and gender? Back the thing
were a lot different and white males dominated the corporate world. Luckily several studies prove the the business
world is much more diverse than it was 30 years ago.
“The United States Department of Labor estimates that 85 percent of new entrants into the 2013 labor market
“The United States Department of Labor estimates that 85 percent of new entrants into the 2013 labor market
will be women, minorities and immigrants.” Said Laura A. Foster a writer from multibriefs.
When looking at the statistics visually it paints a completely different picture. After comparing several graphs it's
When looking at the statistics visually it paints a completely different picture. After comparing several graphs it's
apparent that white males still dominate the business world, but what about the minority's how have either
numbers changed over the last few years? A graph from the ASTD Training Data Book shows that from 1982 to
2005 that the number of minorities in the workforce is expanding particularly in Asians and Hispanics. This graph
also, shows that it's slowly contracting among white males.
In a perfect world there would be no majority and no monitory in the workforce, but the question is, is that even
In a perfect world there would be no majority and no monitory in the workforce, but the question is, is that even
in the realm of possibility for there to be no minority and no majority in the work force? Sources say it is possible.
“Census data tell us that by 2050 there will be no racial or ethnic majority in our country. Further, between 2000
“Census data tell us that by 2050 there will be no racial or ethnic majority in our country. Further, between 2000
and 2050 new immigrants and their children will account for 83 percent of the growth in the working-age population.” Shown
in an article by americanprogress.org.
So the question still rests. How diverse is the business world? Slowly but surely day by day the workforce is
So the question still rests. How diverse is the business world? Slowly but surely day by day the workforce is
becoming more diverse and in thirty years or so it will no longer be a question to ask.
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Life of a Classical Percussionist in Today’s World:
The day to day struggles between auditions, rejection, and PRACTICE
by Griffin Harrison
Being a member of a symphony orchestra is like having a dream job. You have a tenured position with benefits,
Being a member of a symphony orchestra is like having a dream job. You have a tenured position with benefits,
and you get to play music with world-class musicians everyday.
However, in today’s world, the odds of landing one of these dream jobs are extremely low. The odds of getting
However, in today’s world, the odds of landing one of these dream jobs are extremely low. The odds of getting
drafted into the NBA are higher than the chance of winning an orchestral audition, especially for percussionists.
“In a good year, we may have 4 openings. One position in one of the big 5 orchestras, two in medium sized
“In a good year, we may have 4 openings. One position in one of the big 5 orchestras, two in medium sized
full-time orchestras, and usually one in a smaller part-time ensemble”, said Ruth Cahn, retired percussionist
and assistant timpanist with the Rochester Philharmonic Orchestra.
Every year, 4,000 students across our country graduate with degrees in percussion performance, hoping to squeeze
Every year, 4,000 students across our country graduate with degrees in percussion performance, hoping to squeeze
their way into a job with a professional orchestra.
However, in a standard orchestra there are only 4 positions in the percussion and timpani sections, with one
However, in a standard orchestra there are only 4 positions in the percussion and timpani sections, with one
timpanist and three percussionists.
To make the situation even more competitive, an opening in a professional ensemble only becomes available
To make the situation even more competitive, an opening in a professional ensemble only becomes available
when a member dies, or becomes ill.
“The odds are insane”, said Paul Yancich, Principal timpanist of the Cleveland Orchestra. “This is like the olympics.
“The odds are insane”, said Paul Yancich, Principal timpanist of the Cleveland Orchestra. “This is like the olympics.
Practicing for an orchestra job is like training for an olympic event. This is not easy”.
That means that there could be a year or two when there are no openings, at all.
Then when there is an opening, percussionists from all over the world fly out to audition for that one spot.
A typical orchestral audition has three rounds: Preliminaries, semi-finals, and the finals. Sometimes, there's a
That means that there could be a year or two when there are no openings, at all.
Then when there is an opening, percussionists from all over the world fly out to audition for that one spot.
A typical orchestral audition has three rounds: Preliminaries, semi-finals, and the finals. Sometimes, there's a
resume and pre screening round before the live rounds, where applicants send their resumes and recordings
of their playing.
And even after the audition is over and it’s time for panel to hire someone, sometimes they can’t decide on a
And even after the audition is over and it’s time for panel to hire someone, sometimes they can’t decide on a
player, and they hold the whole audition over again.
It’s no surprise that a lot of incredible players never end up playing in orchestras, just because of this audition
It’s no surprise that a lot of incredible players never end up playing in orchestras, just because of this audition
process.
Nevertheless, their love of the music is so great that percussionists are willing to go through the process of
Nevertheless, their love of the music is so great that percussionists are willing to go through the process of
auditions, rejection, and lots of practice to have a shot at their dream job.
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November 30th Texas City teen Brandy Vela kills herself after being bullied on social media because of her weight.
by Zariah Pendergrass
Reports form Bullying Statistics says rates of bullying has been varied across studies form (9% to 98%).
Reports form Bullying Statistics says rates of bullying has been varied across studies form (9% to 98%).
From the ages 112 to
18 those students have reported a rate of 35% for traditional bullying and 15% for cyber bullying. The bullying
statistics also states that reasons for being bullied most often by students were looks which were (85%) and
body weight (37%).
CNN claims that Brandy's sister, Jackie says she had always been bullied for her weight, but the cyber bullying
CNN claims that Brandy's sister, Jackie says she had always been bullied for her weight, but the cyber bullying
has ramped up in April. "People would make up fake Facebook accounts and they would message her and she
wouldn't respond and they would still come at her". Jackie Vela also states the comments mentioned were mea like, 'Why are you still here?'
With the percentages of bullying and cyber bullying rising it seems as those students have been bullied at one
With the percentages of bullying and cyber bullying rising it seems as those students have been bullied at one
point in their life and it has doubled from 918% to 34%) from 2007-2016. Without any help from the police Brandy
Vela felt helpless and she didn't know what to do.
It's suggested that the association between bullying and suicide related behaviors is a big relationship to the
It's suggested that the association between bullying and suicide related behaviors is a big relationship to the
statistics. It's often mediated by factors such as depression, violent behaviors, and substance abuse. Vela sends a
text to her family stating "I love you so much, please remember that, and I'm sorry for everything". Her family
rushes home just to walk in on her pointing the gun at herself, and before they could convince her to not pull
the trigger she had already did.
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NOTE: whoever wrote the following, please identify
yourself, otherwise you will not receive credit
Bullying “it's bad”
Childhood bullying is very prevalent throughout the public school system. On January 5 there was a
Childhood bullying is very prevalent throughout the public school system. On January 5 there was a
charge filed for bullying. A concerned parent states their child was being bullied. A child whom once
lived school now fears going and cries everyday when she has to go. The parent says that the school
teacher and administration was informed and has not done anything about the situation.
There are many different views and opinions which take place on this thought.
“Bullying doesn't exist, who is to judge what is mean and hurtful to others. Everyone is so sensitive now
There are many different views and opinions which take place on this thought.
“Bullying doesn't exist, who is to judge what is mean and hurtful to others. Everyone is so sensitive now
you never know who will be offended by what”
“I would rather be a little nobody, then to be a evil somebody.”
“Knowing what's right doesn't mean much unless you do what's right.”
“People who love themselves, don’t hurt other people. The more we hate ourselves, the more we want
“I would rather be a little nobody, then to be a evil somebody.”
“Knowing what's right doesn't mean much unless you do what's right.”
“People who love themselves, don’t hurt other people. The more we hate ourselves, the more we want
others to suffer.”
Many people are against bullying because it harms the social aspect of these children, it scares them
Many people are against bullying because it harms the social aspect of these children, it scares them
emotionally and sometimes even physically. Some of these kids overcome the issue but some kids are no
longer able to handle it and leads them to make drastic life changing decisions. The kids who do overcome
this bullying usually come out stronger and can handle more emotional situations rationally.
The statement before on how bullying does not exist has some truth to it, but where as the speaker grew up at
The statement before on how bullying does not exist has some truth to it, but where as the speaker grew up at
an earlier time period without technology he was able to get away from the bullying where kids now always have
it because of social media and other aspects which can bring it into their own home.
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The Truth Behind
Final Year of High School
by Maria Morales
On average, teens reported their stress level was 5.8 on 10-point scale due to the
activities and priorities that teens have to keep up with, especially those in their last
year of high school.
Friday afternoon, I obtained the opportunity to ask two School Of The Arts seniors about
their perspectives on the reality of being a senior.
‘’Honestly senior year isn’t anything like the things I’ve been told by seniors before me,
I was expecting to be out of school by at least 6th period, but I’ve decided to take extra
courses to have a full schedule: sadly, it's almost the same as all the other years of high
school, with a little more stress because of the college process, deadlines and financial needs
for things such as trips, and college fees,’’ Nuria Osman said. ‘’ I was expecting senior year to be a
lot more fun, but that depends on the kind of school you attend : we haven’t really been
given any senior privileges.’’
‘’I learned some hard truths about School Of The Arts and our district :students , especially
seniors, aren’t their top priority’’, Frieda Jones , a School Of The Arts senior said.
‘’Only about a third of U.S. high school seniors are prepared for college-level coursework
in math and reading’’, Lauren Camera , an educated reporter said.
Half of the seniors do not graduate and have to attend summer school.
As well as half of the seniors do not part take in senior activities.
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Social media and
it's politics
Social media has an impact on
politics that's larger than ever before.
By: Jacob Dillon
In recent years, social media has had an enormous impact on
politics and continues to do
this to this day. With the digital age thriving
and everyone having access to the internet as
well as computers, it's no
surprise. Media makes it as easy as possible for people to
communicate with
each other, meaning that information and ideas can spread very quickly.
This
can be both a good and a bad thing.
News nowadays can spread like wildfire, meaning that
messages like weather advisories or
evacuation orders can quickly get to the
people that need them, however this also means that
things like smear campaigns
or lies can spread just as quickly. This is especially an issue since
politicians now have a medium to communicate with other's while avoiding the
filters of
normal media. Which is something "Politicians
have long sought to go around" according to
journalist, Mary Kate
Cary.
This might not seem like much of an issue, and to an extent,
it's not, but it can be when the
factor that dictates the popularity of a topic
or news story is how attention grabbing it is.
Meaning that the personality of
the author and the controversy behind the topic is more
important than the
topic itself.
A good example of this is Donald Trump. He might not have
been everyone's favorite
candidate
for president, but he did generate a lot of
attention from news stations by saying controversial
things that not many other
people were willing to say. That in return, gave him a lot of attention,
which
is exactly what he wanted.
This isn't the first time in history media has affected
politics. This also happened in the 1920's
with the invention of the radio and
in the 1960's with the invention of television. Both of these
made it easier
for politicians to communicate to potential voters. However, this is the first
time
that a new medium can be used effectively and negatively to influence
potential voters.
Despite the drawbacks, social media can still have positive
impacts. It makes communication
easier than ever and can go as far as to help
raise money for charities. Considering the pros and
cons, social media is still
an amazing thing to have in our lives.
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Diversity in a Different Arena
by Ny Asia Rivera
Diversity-being able to be who you are, your true self. I feel that to being
able to accomplish definition
of diversity I have to b unapologetic and
sometimes it is my responsibility to make others aware. I’m getting
better at
making others aware in a more meaningful way and the response I receive from
others are more genuine.
I appreciate wen I am face diversity and the other
person is comfortable with privilege, if appropriate.
At my new employment we serve the seriously mentally ill-SMI in this capacity
of world I am able to see
diversity in many forms. I see diversity in the
clients that I serve and my college’s that provide the service in the
level of
our works and in our approaches to the work as we all work together to serve the
same purpose, we see a
collage of success among our clients. As an agency we
purpose to strive to be aware of diversity as we serve a
diverse population.
The population we serve is diverse in their needs, abilities, and our approach
to meet them
where they are. It is fulfilling to begin working with a client
with no expectations and aware of my biases, to
ensure that my client receives
the fairest process I can provide. We are expected to serve our clients using
the
person centered approach, but I find that
it is extremely important to pay
attention to my biases, to insure a unique experience for each of my clients.
I always keep in mind that my thought, ideas, and opinions are also forms of
diversity.
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Body Art
What better way is there to express yourself ?
by Jemiah Chester
Body art is displayed worldwide. Humans have always
used this art to convey messages and deeper meanings.
Getting a tattoo is not
the only type of body art by the way, but is the most common. There are so many
people
that get tattoos done that's there is no solid average per year, the
percentage just keeps rising. One of the main
reasons an individual gets a
tattoo, is to honor someone that they cared about very much that passed away.
An
average percent of Americans that have a tattoo is 23%. Americans spend more
than 1.65 billion dollars on tattoos
per year. Reasons for people getting
tattoos vary. 29% of people say their tattoos makes them feel rebellious,
31%
say their tattoo makes them feel more sexy, and 17% of people regret their
tattoo. 11% of that 17% are
planning on getting their tattoo removed.
An average of 36% of U.S adults ages 18-25 have at least one tattoo.
Adults
aged 26-40 have an average of 40%. All together there is an average of 45
million individuals with tattoos.
In the United States there is an average of
21,000 total tattoo parlors. Many individuals happen to be addicted to
ink,
other individuals believe “meaning” is the most important factor of a tattoo. I
spoke to both my mom and my
cousin and they both believe have many tattoos.Both
of them explained to me why they got each one.All of their
tattoos had meaning
and told a story.
Body piercings are another type
of body art. About 14% of Americans have a piercing, and about 8% have both
piercings and tattoos. Another common body art that is currently trending is
Henna, originating from Asia and the
Mediterranean region, it is a flowering
shrub most commonly used to dye hair and decorate your body with designs. Henna
lasts rich and vibrantly in your have for 4-6 weeks. On the skin it lasts 1-3
weeks depending on the quality of the henna and
how much paste was applied.
Many people stated that henna makes them feel “cooler”.
If you're an individual that loves to
express yourself, why not show it through Body Art ?
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High school stereotypes you don’t
ever hear about
RCSD students confess their
thoughts about rival schools
Alannah Scardino, RCSD student
It’s no secret that stereotypes in high school are a
problem that can lead to bullying, social dysfunction,
and in some extreme
cases, discrimination. However, there is also a form of stereotyping in high
schools
which affects students district-wide.
Students
throughout any school district are conditioned to have certain biases. From the
time
parents of eighth-grade students scout out worthy high schools for their
child to high school graduation,
schools have told their students that they
were the best and other schools were insubordinate. Sports
teams in the
district form harsh rivals, schools compete for budgets, and students learn to
put their
school’s interests first. This translates to a variety of stereotypes
about every school, specifically in the
RCSD.
When asked
about their own schools, most students had very positive words to describe the
environment they have been taught in. School of the Arts students (cited
anonymously) described
their school as “creative,” “supportive,” and “diverse.”
However, students from East High School,
Joseph C. Wilson Magnet High School,
and The Leadership Academy for Young Men have described
the arts school as
“corrupt,” and “conceited.”
School of the
Arts students believe that these negative adjectives may stem from School of
the
Arts’ high test scores. “We have the highest scores in the district,” said
senior SOTA student Grace
Conheady. “And while that doesn’t account for
everyone’s individual performances I
can imagine that a lot of
[under performing] people just accept that identity without doing anything.”
Similarly,
East High School was viewed very positively by its own students, called
“developing” and
“athletic.” However, it was described by other RCSD students
as “disorganized” and “ghetto.”
Senior East student Eric Maldonado associated
the negative comments about East with sports rivalries.
“East has always been
the best in sports in the city. We know a lot of people aim to beat us, which
includes aiming rumors and trash-talk at us.” Senior Kenny Jackson added, “We
have a lot to offer,
we just get the wrong publicity. [No one] focuses on the
good we’re doing.”
It is hard to
tell where all of these stereotypes begin, though from football games to test
scores every
school in the RCSD has some level of competition with each other.
It is important to keep in mind that
although school pride is an important
aspect of high school culture, respecting and accepting other
schools benefits
the entire RCSD atmosphere.
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Nintendo Switch™ detail revealed and launch lineup confirmed!
Nintendo’s new Handheld-Home console about to launch.
by Daniel Lampe
The Nintendo Switch™ originally known as “Nintendo NX” got revealed a couple of months ago, showing
us a little bit of the actual console. The Nintendo Switch is a tablet with detachable controllers that can dock
with your TV, playing its games anywhere.
On January the 12th at 11pm EST, Nintendo started a Livestream showing us more detail about their newest
console in Tokyo, Japan. Nintendo told us, that the Nintendo Switch™ will release on March 3rd and will not
come with a Region Lock which means you can play games outside of their released origin on your console.
Nintendo also announced, that their Online function will be a paid service starting Fall 2017. You can play any
Nintendo Switch game on your big-screen TV at home, but why stop there? Pull the Switch out of the docking
station next to your TV, and you can take that game on the go. The console also has multiple control options,
being a traditional Controller mode, a handheld mode and a “Wii-Mote” mode all in one. The Controller so-called
“Joy-Con”, was announced and described in detail by General Producer Yoshiaki Koizumi.
The Nintendo Switch will cost $299,99 in the United States and it will come with the Nintendo Switch tablet, the
Docking station, 2 Joy-Con Controllers, Controller Straps, HDMI Cables, and Chargers.
You can also buy a traditional style Controller as additional accessories. Nintendo announced a variety of game
titles coming out for the Nintendo Switch throughout the year, with one of them being “ゼルダの伝説, ブレス オブ ザ ワイルド
(The Legend of Zelda, Breath of the Wild)”, an open world Sandbox game. Splatoon 2, Super Mario Odyssey,
Skyrim Switch, Dragon Quest Heroes 1+2, Xenoblade 2, 1,2 Switch, ARMS, Mario Kart 8 Deluxe and others
were also announced by Nintendo that night. Speaking of Skyrim. 3rd Party support for the Nintendo Switch
got increased clearly and Yoshiaki Koizumi announced that over 80 Game titles for the Switch are in the works
as of right now.
That is all we know about the Nintendo Switch as of right now and I’m excited for it to launch on March 3rd.
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“ Part Time Jobs While in High School”
By Serena Benson on January 13, 2017
“ when i first got my job i was only working days in the weekend and had saturdays free. So my social life
wasn't really affected because i was used to being at dance for so long. After a while i was working every
friday i had so in between dancing everyday and work i have minimal time for myself and do chores let alone
have a social life.” - Claire Foster
“It has partially burned me educationally because you have to devote more time to work than school work on
the weekend and don't have as much time to study or complete assignments, but socially it has actually
benefited me because i work with lot of my close friends that i care alot about.” -Alannah Scardino
As a young adult high school can get tough, there's a lot of pressures and responsibilities as you go into the
high grades. Some students choose to include having a job as part of their responsibilities through high school.
Having a job while still in school can become a hard challenge to balance grades a job and a social life which
are all very valuable to maintain in high school. I asked students who had a job throughout their high school years if having a job during school has affected their social and education. Most said that they had to chose one of the three over
the other and mostly their social life would suffer.
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MEASURING UP TO AN OLDER SIBLING
By: Mabel Diaz
The pressure of feeling like you will not be in same level as your older sibling is challenging. We tend to
look up to our older siblings because of what they achieved, because they are more successful than us, but
truth is that only time will bring you those things that you have wanted, if you work hard and stay dedicated.
We want to hold a degree like our older siblings, and not feel the pressure of waking up to go to school on a
daily basis.
We want to be able to afford nice things, to have a nice car, to feel independent, to have real friends and be
able to travel and plan with them like our older siblings. In reality, our siblings have been through what we
have, maybe worst but “someday we will be successful” like them. Life is about struggling now, so that you will
be successful in the future, have you ever heard of the phrase, “ There’s light at the end of the tunnel”, life is
a process where the most important things take time. While we’re growing up we first look up to our parents,
and then our siblings. We tend to do that because our parents don’t understand things like the younger generation, and then that’s where we start following our older siblings steps, because of the pressure of society, and the pressure at
home. We feel like we start to feel comfort from our siblings because they are more likely to understand us, and the situations that we go through.
We tend to handle situation like our older siblings have, because to us it seems like that’s the best option, choice, or the right thing to do.
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Local Business shut down due to mice infestation
Bay and Goodman Pizza temporarily closed
by Rose Elliot
Despite the blockbuster film “Ratatouille” romanticizing the
appearance of rodents in the kitchen, on January 15th Bay
and Goodman Pizza was
temporarily shut down due to mouse infestation. The owners have hired an
exterminator
who was working to eliminate the mice on Friday evening, the
restaurant hopes to re-open Tuesday after a
re-inspection from the Health
Department.
I interviewed a former employee of Bay and Goodman Pizza who
wishes to remain anonymous, but was able to
give us a first hand account of
just how bad the mice problem was, “um I was packaging up cookies in the back
kitchen and I heard a little squeak, and so I look back from behind the big
mixer, he ran across from one side of
the kitchen to the other”. This former
employee said they didn’t realize how unhealthy it is for mice to be in the
kitchen, unaware that mice can carry diseases such as Rat Bite Fever,
Hantavirus Pulmonary Syndrome (HPS),
and Salmonellosis.
Many people are unaware of
the dangers of having mice in the kitchen, a past customer of Bay and Goodman
who also wishes to remain anonymous was heard saying “if someone bought me
pizza and it happened to be
from Bay and Goodman, I’d still eat it even after
they got shut down, pizza is pizza”.
Bay and Goodman Pizza wasn’t the only place in Rochester to be
shut down because of a mice problem this week,
the downtown Radisson Kitchen
was closed by the health department on January 10, 2017 and opened after
extermination four days later.
In the early 1950’s Bay and Goodman Pizza opened on the corner
that bares it’s name. For the past 67 years this
restaurant has gained
popularity that they credit to age old family recipes.
Unfortunately for the owners of this local Rochester business,
now located on Winton Road and Browncroft
Boulevard, these recipes weren’t
savory enough to sway the health inspectors eyes from the stow away mice
living
in the walls of their eatery.
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By Zachary Mangiaracina
Future Technology Now
By Zachary Mangiaracina
Technology has
exponentially become better. The devices that we use now have gotten more
compact whilst becoming more powerful. Phones that used to be the size of a
briefcase have shrunken down to be able to fit within our pockets while also
having the computing power of a cheaper computer.
A standard that
could be used for reference are the computers in any of the computer labs
within schools. These computers while not necessarily outdated are lower on the
tier list of how well they perform, with that said the new strides in
technology have put those computers to shame. The new standard has risen higher
than ever, to the point where a laptop has more processing power than all the
computers within a computer lab. These new laptops while not being cheap
whatsoever starting at $9000 have the highest specifications of any laptop ever
made before. The idea that, that much computing power can fit into one mobile
device that can be taken anywhere is astonishing.
Just 40-50 years
ago computer advancements happened nowhere near the rate at which we move
today; Brian Mangiaracina my father who has been in the tech industry for over
20+ years stated “When I got started it was easy to keep up to date with the
current tech because we got advancements every now and again. Now it’s hard to
keep up due to the increased rate at which people invent new ways to crank out
more power out of every device. It amazes me how they never seem to hit a wall
when making new technology and how fast it all gets integrated into everyone’s
daily life”.
Modern day
components are far superior to those of even 5 years ago. What was once held to
be the highest tier components have already been replaced with things that are
twice to even quadruple the power, and while that doesn’t seem like much it
makes a world of difference.
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School Lunches
The school’s view
By Kiarah Phillips
American school lunches are
not very pleasant to eat at times. Most students do not eat it, according to a
survey. While some students do not mind the lunches, others find it disgusting.
The survey proved that most
students do not eat school lunches.
While taking the survey, the
students and some teachers gave various different answers. “I was sick for a month
and couldn’t figure out why,” SOTA librarian Jonathan Kelly said, “Finally I
stopped eating lunches at school and felt way better. After researching the
ingredients the lunches, I concluded that all the chemicals and preservatives
in the food was what made me sick.”
Many students in city
schools across America have been blaming Michelle Obama and her ‘healthy’
school lunches for the bad taste of their food. “Too healthy, it takes away
from the food.” One Student said.
In another news article, (https://www.washingtonpost.com/news/wonk/wp/2014/11/24/students-are-blaming-michelle-obama-for-their-gross-school-lunches/?utm_term=.b6da9d51dff1)
Kids used a hashtag, #thanksmichelleobama to thank her for what they thought
were disgusting lunches. Will the Lunches get better once Michelle and Obama
leave the White house?
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Sibling Rivalry
You Can Pick Your Seat, But Not Your Family
By Jahde Brown
One of the greatest influences in a person's life is the one that a sibling makes. It is the role in the family that develops many of the skills we need in adulthood. Through these early competitions and comparisons we begin to label our self with specific characteristics, such as stubborn, brave, weak, strong, smart, et cetera. It is indeed lucky to have a nurturing brother or sister because they can structure our future relationships with the opposite sex forever, breaking or nurturing marriages for a lifetime. For example, when two first-borns marry, there are high probabilities of conflict possible because they were both raised to take charge and not share responsibilities.
I asked Ameena Brown, a thirteen year-old middle child,what her opinion of older siblings was. “They are very annoying,” she started immediately. “It gets hard to be your own person sometimes, too, because they are always in the way.” It seems that the presence of an older sibling can usually cause one to feel overshadowed and cast into the background. When I asked Brown what she felt was the best way to cope with an older and overbearing sibling, she found herself giving an answer of different tone. “Just remember to be okay with their decisions and show respect to each other… and understand where they’re coming from [when they take over]. A lot times they’re trying to help because they love you.” Brown then said with a smile, “Remember you don’t have to be just like them-- don’t be afraid to do your own thing.”
Making the choice to understand your siblings’ perspectives is one of the highest forms of respect you can ever offer them. While there may come a time when you have to respect them from a distance, your brothers and sisters are some of the greatest teachers you will ever have. The lessons you learn from them now will ensure you and your family can have a lifetime filled with happy memories and peaceful holidays for years to come.
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The problem and the absurdities of the College Admission Process
By Manny Rivera
Instead of preparing students for college or more importantly, for life students spend all of their pre-college years preparing themselves for the moment of admission. College admissions are for admission officers that look at a applicant’s grades,test scores and interest.
At this time of year high school students all across the U.S are applying to colleges. By now students should already be committed to a college, but some students are easily pressured by doing admissions because they feel as if they are not worthy or feel they won't stand out to their dream school that they want to attend.
For high school senior who thinks their future is at stake, applying to college can be incredibly stressful especially the admission process. Colleges are interested in students who will fit into the education offered at their institution. Admission officers clearly see who is a potential applicant and those who are not are rejected from the school.
For the last four years students have been scrambling to ace AP classes, taking and retaking their SATs or ACTs to get the perfect score they desire. Although these tests try to measure one form of intelligence, even in that role they turn out not to be very good predictors. But it's never enough last year the requirements have changed as they do every year colleges want students to have scores that are impossible to reach.
Today, colleges are relying on standardized test scores when making admissions decisions to a far larger degree than they have in years. One reason is that the number of applications at most top colleges is soaring. That’s not because there are more 17/18 year-olds are graduating from high school. It's because more students are each applying to more colleges. And with little increase in the size of admission staffs at most colleges, schools are using SAT and ACT scores to make a fast, easy cut of the applicant pool.
As students apply and wait upon college letters and have to deal with rejection or, for the lucky ones, the difficulty of deciding where to spend the next four key years. Kristin O'Rourke, a former social worker says “I think it's the lack of control that they have that really makes them feel stressed."
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Homelessness the government’s fault of humans
by Rosalia Rosario
Homelessness
is a situation in which an individual or family lacks permanent housing that
has been a problem throughout human history. Widespread in ancient societies,
it has become less common in modern times as the overall standard of living has
risen. Nevertheless, various physical, economic, social, and political problems
continue to disrupt people’s lives and leave many without regular shelter
Homelessness in America is horrific. Its percent is about 46.2. Every night
there is about 633,782 people living on the street every night? Many people
believe that the government causes homelessness; other people believe it is
manmade.
The history of homelessness was
worse than it is today but we seem to be getting more and more close to that
every day. The government has given people an opportunity to get food stamps
provide them with welfare and affordable housing. Welfare is many things more
than just helping people find a home. Say that you’re a young woman by the age
of 18 with one child. You have no job or money no food or a home for you and
child the welfare can provide you with a shelter or a hotel for the night and
the next morning you would need to go to that building and then they would look
through small affordable homes or apartments and when you find one that fits
you they would pay for your rent until you get a stable job. The welfare also
gives you furniture voucher to help you go and buy cheap nice furniture for
your home. This is currently going on now in 2016. Another approach the
government took was the National Collation for Homeless Veterans.
There is plenty of common
misconceptions about homeless people. One would be they brought the situation
to themselves. The other would be that they are all criminal, mentally ill, or
lazy and unwilling to work. The reality is that while some homeless people have
made bad choices that led to homelessness, it is only one of many causes for
their situation. Often it is simply that circumstances thrust them into this
state through no fault of their own. While there are some people in life who
are unwilling or unable to work, it can be incredibly difficult for a homeless
person to get any kind of job. There is no way to contact them, they often lack
appropriate clothing or facilities where they can to groom themselves properly,
and once someone finds out the applicant is homeless their prejudices kick in
and they will not hire them simply because they are homeless. Due to homeless,
the average life span of an American is 79 years old. Most men and women suffer
from PTSD.
Nevertheless, various physical,
economic, social, and political problems continue to disrupt people’s lives and
leave many without regular shelter Homelessness in America is horrific. Many
people believe that the government causes homelessness; other people believe
it’s man made. Governments try to help this situation everyday but there’s more
that should be done to it.
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Sister Cities Changing Lives
Rochester Around the World
By: Alyssa Steger
President Dwight David Eisenhower initiated “International Sister Cities of Rochester”(ISCOR), a people-to-people program to encourage Americans to communicate with people around the globe and for communities to bond together by engaging in projects that are mutually beneficial.
The Sister Cities Program was developed in 1956 to enlist hundreds of thousands of volunteer citizen-diplomats in a quest for world peace. Rochester has Sister Cities all over the world such as in Novgorod Russia, Krakow Poland, Caltanissetta Italy, and Rennes France which creates an extremely diverse community.
Recently, the Eastman School of Music held a Russian Friendship concert, honoring the great Veliky Novgorod. Both in the audience and on stage there was a broad range of Americans and Russians. It was very interesting to attend an event in such a small and diverse community. Someone at the concert visiting Rochester from Russia said, “It was cool to see Americans perform Russian music, and it was cool to see Russians performing here so far from home.” His face lit up with joy, and it was an experience for everyone in attendance. Having sister cities is helping everyone all over the world experience different cultures and feel it from the inside.
The City of Rochester was one of the first cities to develop closer ties with its counterparts abroad when Mayor Peter Barry signed the initial Sister City agreement with Rennes, France, in 1958. International Sister Cities of Rochester and its sister city committees organize and carry out Rochester's Sister Cities Program. Relying on the support of volunteers from throughout the Rochester region, ISCOR promotes international understanding, cooperation, and development through a variety of dynamic exchanges with its sister cities around the globe. ISCOR supports projects which link the sister cities, and serves as an international gateway for economic, cultural, educational, medical, and governmental exchanges between Rochester and its sister cities.
There is an exchange program specifically for Rochester and its counterparts across the world. The Association for Teen-Age Diplomats (ATAD) is an organization completely run by volunteers, which is affiliated with sister cities everywhere. ATAD is a non-profit organization to encourage and promote understanding, friendship, and goodwill through international exchange between teenage students to and from the City of Rochester. Deniz Akman, an ATAD student from Turkey said "I feel very lucky because now I have...two different lives, a little American accent, a piece of an American heart, a different view of the world and an experience I'll never be able to forget." The program has brought people together, and has served as a cultural exchange.
Not a lot of people know about the sister city program, and say it is affecting only a select few and wish more were benefiting from the diversity the program has to offer. “I don’t know much about them [sister cities] but they do a good job at connecting small groups of people around the world.” said Alannah Scardino. She expressed to me how cool it would be if more people took advantage of these little diverse communities and met new people. Sister cities have created many friendships, and introduced new people, cultures, and experiences to people around the globe.
Kiarah Phillips
ReplyDeleteStatistics and Facts about Child Abuse in the U.S.
- This was a great news story! I did not know that there were so many children abused and neglected in Monroe County. The pie chart was a great asset in the article as well.
Singer Breaks Silence
Mariah Carey’s Team Shuts Down New Year’s Eve Rumors
- Intriguing article. It is good to know what actually happened instead of hearing false allegations about Mariah Carey not being able to sing. I wonder if they are going to sue Dick Clark Productions.
The Truth of Senior Year:
What No One Tells You about Your Senior Year
- I love how this article showed how seniors feel throughout the school year. While it can be frustrating and stressful, it’s worth it.
Statistics Shows Pro and Cons of Attending School and Having a Job
- Interesting article. There are a few grammar and spelling mistakes, but otherwise this is a good news story and relatable to many, including me.
Local Business shut down due to mice infestation
Bay and Goodman Pizza temporarily closed
- I love the reference from ratatouille. I also did not know that mice carried those diseases. Very interesting!
The problem and the absurdities of the College Admission Process
- I love this news story. Since many seniors face trouble with the admission and application process, it’s very relatable. This is a very helpful and interesting article.
Sibling Rivalry
You Can Pick Your Seat, but Not Your Family
- This article could be relatable to many siblings, including myself. It is true that they are annoying at times, but they do help you as you grow to be your own person, even if you don’t feel as if you are.
Katherine Scardino: Good job using interview sources as well as a citation from a public organization to provide evidence for your claims.
ReplyDeleteNuria Osman: Great job incorporating the quotes of a former middle schooler and a current middle schooler—it gives the story a lot of beneficial perspective.
Katherine Fuss: I love the concise structure of your article. You provide both perspectives very well and all of your supporting evidence flows well.
Tonyeisha Brown: I loved the final message given at the end of the story about fighting senioritis.
Griffin Harrison: Very well-spoken and obviously coming from the heart! I thought that it was very informative on an issue which not many people know a lot about.
Claire Foster: Good message and use of quotes to back up your perspectives.
Serena Benson: Good job getting long quotes with a lot of information packed into them.
Rose Elliott: Great story! It was full of imagery and allusions to pop culture. Any reader would be entertained reading this article because it gives the entire story, relates it to Rochester history, and includes elements of pop culture.
1. Singer Breaks Silence
ReplyDeleteMariah Carey’s Team Shuts Down New Year’s Eve Rumors
This article made me empathize for Mariah Carey and all the trash talk people have been saying about her, it was good and explained what really happened.
2. Senioritis Hurts High School Seniors
Growing use of social media hinders senior focus
This article accurately represents my feelings towards senioritis, in the sense that it is a very prevalent feeling in my life as a senior.
3. Nintendo Switch™ detail revealed and launch lineup confirmed!
Nintendo’s new Handheld-Home console about to launch.
I think this article had a lot of information and followed the pyramid structure well.
4. “Part Time Jobs While in High School”
The author did a good job getting quotes from people.
5. Years of Misery, or amusement?
Middle school: 3 years of many emotions,lessons
The lead in this article was entertaining to me because I connected with it so much, especially the smell of Axe body spray.
6. Racist or not?
In the past few years, a lot has been made of racial logos and team namesakes.
This article was able to use relevant culture references like sports teams to make the point impactful.
7. The Truth of Senior Year:
What No One Tells You About Your Senior Year
This article did a good job of highlighting reasons seniors could be experiencing higher stress levels for people who no longer connect with the younger generations because standards for high school seniors have changed so much.
8. The Truth Behind It All
Reasons why college might be right or wrong for you
The title of this article made me want to read it because it is a topic I have been struggling with recently, and it proves that headlines are important to gaining readers.
Joshua Pettway
ReplyDeleteSenioritis Hurts High School Seniors
-Interesting topic, easy to relate to on a personal level for high school seniors.
Years of Misery, or amusement?
-Funny topic about the lost years of school and keeps you interested throughout the story.
Singer Breaks Silence
-Brought out the truth of what really happened to her performance and who is behind it.
Statistics Shows Pro and Cons of Attending School and Having a Job
-Nice topic, Helps decided if getting a job is worth it or not while in school.
Social media and its politics
-Helps to see that social media can spread political topics.
High school stereotypes you don’t ever hear about
-Great story, great to hear views from other school students to understand there view of their school.
Future Technology Now
-Helps you to see that technology advances rapidly even faster than what I would’ve thought.
Part Time Jobs While in High School
-Didn’t know most people would chose work over a social life.
Claire Foster
ReplyDeleteSenioritis Hurts High School Seniors
Katherine Scardino
I think all seniors can relate to this and im glad you brought the attention of how bad it is.
High school stereotypes you don’t ever hear about
RCSD students confess their thoughts about rival schools
Alannah Scardino, RCSD student
I really enjoy how you got many schools to help you, it is very informative.
“ Part Time Jobs While in High School”
By Serena Benson on January 13, 2017
Good job writing about the unheard story of teenagers.
Local Business shut down due to mice infestation
Bay and Goodman Pizza temporarily closed
by Rose Elliot
This was very informative and funny. Good job on the inside work!
School Lunches
The school’s view
By Kiarah Phillips
I agree with the statement, I hope Jonathan Kelly is feeling great again.
Body Art
What better way is there to express yourself ?
by Jemiah Chester
Body art is very cool and I'm so glad that many americans can express themselves. .
The Truth Behind It All
Reasons why college might be right or wrong for you
By: Rashi'd Pendleton
Great job explaining the different income wages that happen, very informative.
Statistics and Facts about Child Abuse in the U.S.
By Adrianna Lester
I learned a lot from your article.
1. Statistics and Facts about Child Abuse in the U.S.
ReplyDeleteThis is a good job of exposing an issue that is not talked about enough, especially in our own community. I like how questions were brought up to get the audience thinking.
2. Senioritis Hurts High School Seniors
Growing use of social media hinders senior focus
This is so true!!
3. Years of Misery, or amusement?
Middle school: 3 years of many emotions,lessons
This makes a good point that even though we go through painful or unpleasant experiences, those moments in our lives help to shape us into the people we are today.
4. Integration of Humans, Technology
Technology Impacted Lives Since Wheel
Very informative and interesting!
5. Local Business shut down due to mice infestation
Bay and Goodman Pizza temporarily closed
Hahah, I like the Ratatouille reference! Very well done!
6. Sibling Rivalry
You Can Pick Your Seat, But Not Your Family
Interesting topic and very a cool view of sibling rivalry.
7. High school stereotypes you don’t ever hear about
RCSD students confess their thoughts about rival schools
Good headline, intrigues the reader and hooks them in.
8. The Truth Behind
Final Year of High School
Wow, this is the harsh truth of senior year in the RCSD. well written.
1. Local Business shut down due to mice infestation
ReplyDeleteBay and Goodman Pizza temporarily closed
By: Rose Elliott
This is a great article with a great opening that made me want to continue reading. Nice use of facts and quotes.
2. High school stereotypes you don’t ever hear about
RCSD students confess their thoughts about rival schools
Alannah Scardino, RCSD student
This is an interesting article. I love how you tied in all the information you collected because when you were talking about it I was wondering how you would do that. Great evidence.
3. The Truth Behind
Final Year of High School
By: Maria Morales
This article included good quotes, but not a lot of the authors own thoughts in between to describe the quoes which could’ve made it stronger.
4. Men and women fashion, are you in or out?
by Steven Colson
I love the headline--it’s actually what made me start reading. I love the fashion take, it was a unique topic to choose to write about. I love your examples, and I agree with them!
5. The Truth Behind It All
Reasons why college might be right or wrong for you
By: Rashi'd Pendleton
I love the topic you chose. It is a reality no high school senior wants to face because of the outside pressure that kids need to go to college. Insightful information!
6. Years of Misery, or amusement?
Middle school: 3 years of many emotions,lessons
By Nuria Osman
This is the truth! I like how you decided to talk about how middle school will always be a memory. Good use of quotes from both a middle schooler, and high school reflecting on middle school.
7. Senioritis Hurts High School Seniors
Growing use of social media hinders senior focus
By: Katherine Scardino
I love this and can relate to it so much. I agree with so much of what it was said. I love how short, easy to read and to the point this article is. Great use of quotes!
8. The Truth of Senior Year:
What No One Tells You About Your Senior Year
By: Tonyeisha Brown
I love the conclusion bringing everything together, and the quotes. You did a great job making them short to figure out what was important in them.
Taijanah Jackson
ReplyDeleteThe Truth Behind Final Year of High School
This was a good topic to write about because all of us are in our last year of high school and it's a relatable topic for a lot of teens in america because we are probably going into their last year of high school or are in their last year of high school.
Bullying may still be a trend, but losing a loved one isn't, the family of a Texas teen share their story
This is also, another relatable topic because social media is a huge part of millions of teens lives and it shows the dangers of cyberbullying in today's society and how effective it can be in harming people.
Men and women fashion, are you in or out?
This topic nice because millions of people enjoy fashion and it has an interesting take on how similar wom,ens and mens fashions had changed over the years and how short of similar they've become.
The Truth of Senior Year:What No One Tells You About Your Senior Year
This topic was interesting because there's always the myth that your senior year is your easiest year when n a lot of cases it can be the most stressful and frustrating.
Singer Breaks Silence Mariah Carey’s Team Shuts Down New Year’s Eve Rumors
This was a good topic because it's something that is controversial and lot of people were wondering what happened with Mariah Carey’s performance.
Body Art What better way is there to express yourself ?
This was a ice topic because lots of people have some form of body art on themselves and this article talked about how body art is a form of self expression.
School Lunches The school’s view
I enjoyed this article because it talked about a very relatable topic of school lunches and most kids don't enjoy them and it tells the students point of view but also, the schools point of view.
Years of Misery, or amusement?
Middle school: 3 years of many emotions,lessons
I enjoyed this article because it talked about the relatable topic of middle school. Every kid has gone through the awkward phases of middle school and we all know what it like to be there.
Katie Scardino
ReplyDelete1. Singer Breaks Silence
Good article, I like how it was formatted. The quotes seemed very official, though I’m not sure if we are “allowed” to end with a quote.
2. High school stereotypes you don’t ever hear about
Overall, this was a thorough piece and I liked the subject matter. The formatting made it difficult to tell where one paragraph ended and another began, though. The word “ever” in the title seems a bit redundant.
3. Nintendo Switch™ detail revealed and launch lineup confirmed!
Good article. It becomes a bit informal when you slip into the first person in the last sentence, but you provided a lot of good information.
4. “ Part Time Jobs While in High School”
I like the material. The quotes were good but I think it would have helped to incorporate them into the middle of the piece.
5. Local Business shut down due to mice infestation
I think that this article is really good. Your opening line is engaging but still provides all the info necessary in a lead. It was a well-rounded article and your quotes and background information fit in well. I’m not sure if your headline was properly capitalized, but the headline and secondary line had good information.
6. Future Technology Now
The article has a lot of good information, and is formatted well. It would make it less informal however, to give Brian Mangiaracina a title instead of referring to him as ‘your father’.
7. Sibling Rivalry
It has a good title and second line. You could have had more sources, but what you did have you organized nicely.
8. School Lunches
You referenced a survey multiple times but did not cite it. I think using Kelly’s quotes was a good idea, so it would have been nice to see more SOTA perspectives.
1.“Senioritis Hurts High School Seniors: Growing use of social media hinders senior focus” by Katherine Scardino
ReplyDeleteFollowing a strong lead is a story with plenty of detail that is also concise, in which readers will get what they want without taking too long.
2. "Years of Misery, or amusement? Middle school: 3 years of many emotions,lessons" by Nurio Osman
Clean transitions between sentences makes the article flow nicely.
3. “Singer Breaks Silence: Mariah Carey’s Team Shuts Down New Year’s Eve Rumors” by Katherine Fuss
Overall solid inverted pyramid format with a concise and sufficient lead.
4. “The Truth of Senior Year: What No One Tells You About Your Senior Year” by Tonyeisha Brown
This story is detailed but not too wordy, and gets the point across in a clear manner.
5. “The Truth Behind It All: Reasons why college might be right or wrong for you” by: Rashi'd Pendleton
Great article with sufficient statistics and explanation, woven into paragraphs that transition seamlessly.
6. "Life of a Classical Percussionist in Today’s World: The day to day struggles between auditions, rejection, and PRACTICE” by Griffin Harrison
Very informative article, details that even a fellow musician like myself didn’t know about!
7. "Nintendo Switch™ detail revealed and launch lineup confirmed! :Nintendo’s new Handheld-Home console about to launch" by Daniel Lampe
The details weren’t skimped on, as there is more than enough to get anyone on board (also great that someone wrote about this!)
8. "School Lunches: The school’s view" by Kiarah Phillips
Informative with attributed opinions that enrich the story.
Tonyeisha Brown
ReplyDelete1.“6 Children Found Living in Filth and Gas” by Adrianna Lester
This article is intriguing and well detailed. The lead is very good.
2.“The Truth Behind It All” by Rashi’d Pendleton
Good job. Displays your knowledge of the topic and is in depth.
3.“The Truth Behind Final Year of High School” by Maria Morales
Good research and quotes.
4.“Statistics Shows Pro and Cons Of Attending School and Having A Job”
Thorough research.
5.“Body Art” by Jemiah Chester
Story displays a what, it is informative and filled with research.
6.“Integration of Humans, Technology” by Keoni Smith
Good lead and intriguing topic. Thorough information.
7.“Life of a Classical Percussionist in Today’s World” by Griffin Harrison
Informative story and great quotes. The story showed that you have done a lot of research on the topic.
8.“Singer Breaks Silence” by Katherine fuss
Very informative news story. The lead told the who and the what. Good job.
Rashi'd Pendleton
ReplyDeleteHeadline: Years of Misery, or amusement by Nuria Osman
Comment: The headline of this news story is very creative. It really caught my eye and sparked my interest to wondering what could be consider “years of misery”. The news story itself seemed to be well organized.
Headline: Social Media and its politics by Jacob Dillon
Comment: The news story has good content and really gets the intended message across.
Headline: Diversity in a Different Arena by Ny’Asia Rivera
Comment: Good topic and very expressive.
Headline: School Lunches by Kiarah Phillips
Comment: Great usage of direct quotations and persuasive.
Headline: Sibling Rivalry by Jahde Brown
Comment: The topic of siblings is different, but prominent in today’s society. Well-written and well organized.
Headline: Statistics shows Pros and Cons of attending School and Having a Job by Jose Alicea
Comment: Good use of quote it helps back it the main idea about the negative effects that working can have on a student.
Headline: Integration of humans, Technology by Keoni Smith
Comment: Good well-written news story filled with valuable information and explanations that give a greater understanding on how technology coexist in society today. Great ending!
Headline: The Truth of Senior Year by Tonyeisha Brown
Comment: Way to use my quote. News article is very eye opening and gives information that everyone should know about senior year.
1. Senioritis Hurts High School Seniors
ReplyDeleteGrowing use of social media hinders senior focus
The information in the article is beneficial for a lot of us and the outside information is well incorporated.
2.
The Truth of Senior Year:
What No One Tells You About Your Senior Year
It is open and honest, opens up to the truth.
3.
The Truth Behind It All
Reasons why college might be right or wrong for you
It was well written and all the information seem to be in order. Also all facts were well put.
4.Integration of Humans, Technology
Technology Impacted Lives Since Wheel
The way the article ended was in sync with all the parts.
5.Statistics and Facts about Child Abuse in the U.S.
The way the rhetorical question was used were well put.
6.Life of a Classical Percussionist in Today’s World:
The day to day struggles between auditions, rejection, and PRACTICE
The information was eye opening with the facts that were included such as the odds to make it.
7.The Truth Behind
Final Year of High School
The background was well gathered from the interviews.
8. Sibling Rivalry
You Can Pick Your Seat, But Not Your Family
It was a good topic and well expressive and the just honest.
Avana Davis
ReplyDeleteMs. Parker
Journalism
17 January 2017
1. Racist or not?
- This is not a question that really crossed my mind before. I feel that although the logos are not meant to offend anyone that it still can. Being that natives are not noticeable to society anymore, people feel that they can use them as a logo. If that were to be black people than lots of people would be offended. Due to the fact that black people were used for racial logos during segregation and slavery. In cartoons, on billboards, etc.
2. Statistics Shows Pro and Cons Of Attending School and Having A Job
- I feel that having a job and going to school is very stressful on a student, however it teaches them responsibility and independence.
3. Bulling may still be a trend, but losing a loved one isn't, the family of a Texas teen share their story
- Bullying isn’t a trend its self-hate and hurt. Many people do it when they are not happy with their own life or have some insecurities about themselves. It’s not worth killing yourself over, but many do it. Eventually it has to end and it has been because I have not seen it lately.
4. Diversity in a Different Arena
- Diversity is happening in the United States. We all learn different things from different cultures. At Wegmans everything is diverse. People are able to find any food from any country there.
5. MEASURING UP TO AN OLDER SIBLING
- Yes parents expect you to become superior to your older sibling, but we all know that its impossible. Everyone has their own path they want to follow. It would not be similar to the older sibling.
Fenesse Walker 1/17/17
ReplyDeleteParker Journalism
1.Statistics and Facts about Child Abuse in the U.S.
By Adrianna Lester
I think the headline fits the article very well, and what it’s about. She also gives great facts about unsolved cases on abused and why they need to be solved.
2.Years of Misery, or amusement?
Middle school: 3 years of many emotions,lessons
By Nuria Osman, published: January 13, 2017
I don’t like how she began her sentence because i just didn’t understand what colon had to do with her topic. I liked her headline a lot because in middle school you go through changes and really trying to find who you are and this article basically sums it up.
3.Racist or not?
By Joshua Pettway
I liked the headline because it fits perfectly for this article. I felt it could’ve went more in depth with what the Washington Redskins were but good article overall.
4.The Truth of Senior Year:
What No One Tells You About Your Senior Year by Tonyeisha Brown
The headline definitely fits this article because everyone thinks that the senior year is a breeze when it’s probably one of the most hardest years of high school.
5. Men and women fashion, are you in or out? By Steven Colson
I feel like the title wasn’t strong enough, it could’ve been better. I like how he talked about the evolution of fashion and how it has changed over the decades.
6. The Truth Behind It All
Reasons why college might be right or wrong for you
By: Rashi'd Pendleton
The headline fits the article perfectly because it backs up the main points on why college can be right or wrong for you. I like how he had the statistics to prove what’s the difference between a high school graduate and someone who graduates from college.
7. Statistics Shows Pro and Cons Of Attending School and Having A Job
By Jose Alicea
I don’t like the headline because i feel it could’ve been more stronger. I also didn’t like that he didn’t really have that many facts to prove his statements but overall i think the message behind the article was very well put.
8.The Truth Behind
Final Year of High School
By Maria Morales
I like the headline, it fits the article well. I felt like she used to many interviews and not enough of her opinions on the topic from her but i like the statistics she had and what she was trying to get across.
Zachary Mangiaracina
ReplyDelete1. Racist or not?
- Good job on not showing any of your own bias and bringing attention to the topic.
2. Social media and it’s politics
- This article is very timely and shows importance of social media.
3. Nintendo Switch™ detail revealed and launch lineup confirmed!
- Very informative on Nintendo’s new product.
4. Local Business shut down due to mice infestation
- I really liked your lead comparing it to Ratatouille and your article reminded me of The Jungle by Upton Sinclair
5. Part Time Jobs While in High School
- Very interesting that people prefer to let their social life die out before their job or school.
6. Singer Breaks Silence
- I was unaware that, that was what happened.
7. The Truth of Senior Year
- This is very true, I was always told by seniors and others that this year was supposed to be the easiest/most fun year out of all of them but that has yet be true.
8. The Truth Behind it All
- Your article really shows the pros and cons of going to college and is informative.
Mabel Diaz
ReplyDeleteMrs. Parker
Journalism
January 17, 2017
1. “ The Truth of Senior Year: What no one tells you about senior year “
By: Tonyeisha Brown
Everything that you said is true is an article that will help sophomores and juniors.
2. “Part time jobs while in High School”
By: Serena Benson
Handling a part time job while in High School is difficult, and time consuming, sometimes you have work after school, and don’t have time to do your homework, or work on weekends and don’t have time to hang out with friends.
3. “Future Technology Now”
By: Zachary Mangiaracina
It is insane how much technology it is advancing, what is new to us now would be old in 10 years and we would make fun of it.
4. “School Lunches”
By: Kiara Phillips
Personally, I do not like school lunch either, it supposed to be “Healthy” but the Pizza is super greasy, and so are the other things they cook for us.
5. “Body Art”
By: Jemiah Chester
Personally, I would not get a tattoo, but I do like them on others and I do love when it has a especial message to boost their confidence, or when it’s a reminder of a family member they keep close to their heart.
6. “ Sibling Rivalry, You can pick your seat, but not your family”
By” Jahde Brown
We tend to find siblings annoying because they are just like us, have you seen two positive magnets click?
7. Diveristy in a Different Arena
By: Ny Asia Rivera
True, not everyone will get your personality.
8. “Most of the time victims send to Death because of the bullies”
By: Ler Tha Taw
Many kids now, take everything as a joke that they become so inconsiderate of others feelings, not knowing that life will turn right back at them.
Katherine Fuss
ReplyDeleteNews Article Comments
1. Senioritis Hurts High School Seniors
Growing use of social media hinders senior focus
Katherine Scardino
Your article is written very well, and you have great supporting evidence. Also, I love that you chose this topic; it’s funny, but also a very real issue.
2. Years of Misery, or amusement?
Middle school: 3 years of many emotions, lessons
Nuria Osman
Great job using quotes to support and elaborate on your ideas, and I love your description of your middle school experience.
3. Racist or not?
In the past few years, a lot has been made of racial logos and team namesakes.
Joshua Pettway
Nice job incorporating your quotes in the article, and using specific details and statistics.
4. The Truth Behind It All
Reasons why college might be right or wrong for you
Rashi'd Pendleton
This is a very well written article, and you incorporate your statistics and quotes well.
5. Bullying “it's bad”’
You did a great job choosing a variety of quotes that reflect different opinions about your topic.
6. High school stereotypes you don’t ever hear about
RCSD students confess their thoughts about rival schools
Alannah Scardino, RCSD student
This is a great article, and you did a great job explaining the various perspectives of each high school, and the reasons behind them.
7. “Part Time Jobs While in High School”
Serena Benson
Great job picking quotes that have a lot of detail and insight into your topic.
8. Local Business shut down due to mice infestation
Bay and Goodman Pizza temporarily closed
Rose Elliot
Great job writing this article, your quotes are incorporated well, and I love how you refrenced Ratatouille.
Jacob Dillon
ReplyDelete-Statistics and Facts about Child Abuse in the U.S.-
I did not realize so many children suffer from abuse. Nice work bringing light to such a serious topic.
-Senioritis Hurts High School Seniors-
This was a very entertaining story. I wish there was a cure for senioritis.
- Years of Misery, or amusement?-
The introduction was amusing and the story was interesting, nice work.
- Racist or not?-
I never saw them as offensive, I am glad not too many people see them as offensive either.
- The Truth Behind It All-
I never realized that college debt could get so high. Nice work spreading awareness.
- Statistics Shows Pro and Cons of Attending School and Having a Job-
It’s nice to know the pros and cons considering most if not all of us are heading into the work force in a couple years.
- Bulling may still be a trend, but losing a loved one isn't, the family of a Texas teen share their story-
It’s sad to hear that the bully rates are so high, despite the sad topic it’s still a nice article.
- Future Technology Now-
Nice analysis of the progression of technology. It’s nice to know that our technology is so advanced.
ReplyDeleteLer Tha Taw
Statistics and Facts about Child Abuse in the U.S.
By: Adrianna Lester
•Why abused children when you know it’s not allowed? Those family are must be in crazy mind . Maybe they used drug or something. I like!
Racist or not?
By: Joshua Pettway
•Having a namesakes can not be Racist. Very interesting.
Men and women fashion, are you in or out?
By Steven Colson
•I like the way you compared the clothes of men and women.
The Truth Behind It All
Reasons why college might be right or wrong for you
By: Rashi'd Pendleton
•I know more by reading this story.
Body Art
What better way is there to express yourself ?
By Jemiah Chester
•Having an body art is not a great idea because that is a dumb choice to pick. I like how this story end.
“ Part Time Jobs While in High School”
By Serena Benson on January 13, 2017
•Having a part time job while in school is not a great idea because it mass up your learning. I like this story.
Social media and it's politics
Social media has an impact on politics that's larger than ever before.
By: Jacob Dillon
•Well done , I like this story alots . I like how he compared it with he the old days how people don’t have social Media and no they have everything.
MEASURING UP TO AN OLDER SIBLING
By: Mabel Diaz
•Love it because it’s true that the pressure of feeling like you will not be in same level as your older sibling is challenging. I always feeling like they make better choices. But i think i make better choice than my older sister. Almost finish High School and about to go to College. yayy!
Senioritis Hurts High School Seniors
ReplyDelete-I LOVE IT!! This is extremely relatable and it shows the struggle of seniors trying to hold themselves together for the final stretch of High School.
Years of Misery, or amusement?
-I like this topic. It takes me back to when I was a middleschooler; completely lost, imature and lacking self-identity.
Singer Breaks Silence
-Tells the truth of what really happened during the performance and who was behind it.
Statistics Shows Pro and Cons of Attending School and Having a Job
-I LOVE IT. This will help people on the fence about getting a job while in High School, without being blinded by a paycheck.
Social media and its politics
-This showed how social media can be a platform for exposure to politics and other things.
High school stereotypes you don’t ever hear about
-It's nice to know that students my age are socially aware of things like stereotypes. IT'S TIME TO ACT ON IT TOGETHER NOW!!
Future Technology Now
-These advancements in technology are both intriguing and terrifying. There is so much left to be created and discovered in the technological world, but it makes me think about the day that we will become obsolete.
Part Time Jobs While in High School
-Having a job while in High School is tough, especially if you're involved in extracurricular activities; this can be a burden on your mind and body. I know from personal experience.
Maria Morales
ReplyDelete’“ Part Time Jobs While in High School”
I enjoyed reading this news article because Serena included no bias statements and stated facts that people , like myself can relate to.
Sibling Rivalry
You Can Pick Your Seat, But Not Your Family
I really like this headline , it caught my attention very quickly. This article is very detailed and well put together. Well done
School Lunches
The school’s view
I liked this article as a lot as well because I can highly relate to it. So Great job.
Future Technology Now
This article caught my attention as well because I learned a few things that I never knew before and this is very detailed , so it answered all my questions that I had about this topic.
Body Art
What better way is there to express yourself ?
This article also contained actual percentages of the facts that were trying to be portrayed , which makes me trust this article a lot more and i enjoyed reading about the topic and the argument.
Bullying may still be a trend, but losing a loved one isn't, the family of a Texas teen share their story
The headline of this article already triggered me to read it , so this is a great headline. The details were well put into the story and obtained great statistics with interesting facts.
How diverse is the business world?
This article is also very detailed and organized. The details were important to not so important as well as including all the facts that are relevant to the topic, making it a great news article.
Statistics Shows Pro and Cons Of Attending School and Having A Job
This article is very detailed and includes enough research points and facts that make the reader believe the story you're selling. I thought it was a great article that was organized very well.
Nuria Osman
ReplyDeleteNews stories:
Most of the time victims send to Death because of the Bullies
by Ler Tha Tau
I believe this is an important topic to cover, and bring awareness to things like this.
Singer Breaks Silence
Mariah Carey’s Team Shuts Down New Year’s Eve Rumors
Katherine Fuss
The headline really caught my attention, and I like the different type of sources you used to get your information.
The Truth of Senior Year:
What No One Tells You About Your Senior Year
by Tonyeisha Brown
I enjoyed reading this article, you talked about both the pros and cons of senior year, which was good.
The Truth Behind It All
Reasons why college might be right or wrong for you
By: Rashi'd Pendleton
This headline caught my attention. Overall, the article was great because it was very informative, which can help a lot of people.
Statistics Shows Pro and Cons Of Attending School and Having A Job
By Jose Alicea
I liked how you talked about the good and the bad, it shows that you added important information rather than just opinions.
Integration of Humans, Technology
Technology Impacted Lives Since Wheel
By Keoni Smith
This was a good topic to talk about, especially during this time period, as technology advances.
How diverse is the business world?
Taijanah Jackson
This story was good, I liked how you included statistics to help develop the article more.
High school stereotypes you don’t ever hear about
RCSD students confess their thoughts about rival schools
Alannah Scardino, RCSD student
I enjoyed reading this article, it shows how perspective has great influence on certain stereotypes.
1.Statistics and Facts about Child Abuse in the U.S.
ReplyDeleteBy Adrianna Lester
It was really done well! The facts and information were spot on!
2. Senioritis Hurts High School Seniors
Growing use of social media hinders senior focus
Katherine Scardino
Thought out and very relatable to any high school senior
3. Most of the time victims send to Death because of the Bullies
by Ler Tha Tau
really well written great information
4. The Truth Behind It All
Reasons why college might be right or wrong for you
By: Rashi'd Pendleton
You picked a great topic relatable to every senior in high school
5. Integration of Humans, Technology
Technology Impacted Lives Since Wheel
By Keoni Smith
Brought new information to what I had no idea about
6. How diverse is the business world?
Taijanah Jackson
Great information pulled quotes from some good sources. I wish it were longer
7. Bulling may still be a trend, but losing a loved one isn't, the family of a Texas teen share their story
November 30th Texas City teen Brandy Vela kills herself after being bullied on social media because of her weight.
By Zariah Pendergrass
Touched my soul. No one should ever go through something like that!
8. Part Time Jobs While in High School”
By Serena Benson on January 13, 2017
Great interview action. Wish it were longer and went more into your thoughts about it
Samantha Burgos
ReplyDelete17 January 2017
Journalism
Ms. Parker
Bullying “it's bad”
In this article I found a grammatical error. Instead of saying “a child once loved school…” they said “a child whom once lived school”
2. Final Year of High School
I liked how Maria used a quote from a current senior to describe her experience as she manages through senior year.
3. Social media and it's politics
I admire all the transition words that Jacob used to make his story flow nice and smoothly.
4.Diversity in a Different Arena
This story was very short but very descriptive and had a lot of important information
5. RCSD student
Very in depth and descriptive, i also like how Alannah described our school system so perfectly and thoroughly
6. Nintendo Switch™ detail revealed and launch lineup confirmed
I like how Daniel was very descriptive and specific and used many dates and time periods to pinpoint exactly when things in his story happened.
7. Part Time Jobs While in High School”
I like how Serena used a quote from someone that was negatively impacted by having a part
time while still in school, by following it with a quote from someone that has actually benefitted from having a part time job while in school.
8. MEASURING UP TO AN OLDER SIBLING
I like how Mabel's story sounds more like a poem than a story but still displays the purpose of the article
ReplyDeleteManny Rivera
1. Racist or not?
By Joshua Pettway
Great article, nice combination of adding racist remarks with sports.
2. School lunches
By Kiarah Phillips
Very true, I myself do not find the food here at school amazing.
3. Part Time jobs while in high school
By Serena Benson
Relatable I also work on the weekends and my social life isn't really affected.
4. Future Technology Now
By Zachary Mangiaracina
Technology will forever continue to grow and expands worldwide. The information was very interesting, nice work.
5. The Truth of Senior Year What No One Tells You About Your Senior Year
by Tonyeisha Brown
Headline fits in with the article. Since last year i was always told that senior year is the most easiest year in high school now I look back and realised how wrong they were.
6. Men and women fashion, are you in or out
By Steven Colson
I also noticed that retro clothes are coming back. My closet is somewhat filled with 90s theme clothing which is currently trending throughout streetwear. Great work.
7. Diversity in a Different Arena
by Nyasia Rivera
Diversity is truly a beautiful thing to have especially in our community and it's great to know that you're making others aware in a more meaningful way then those who can't.
8. Body Art, What better way is there to express yourself ?
By Jemiah Chester
The percentage of how many people having tattoos, body piercings and how much is spent yearly was truly shocking. Great job researching I found this information very unique.
Réyenne Stevens
ReplyDelete1. Statistics and Facts about Child Abuse in the U.S.
By Adrianna Lester
a. This was a very eye opening and informative article. I knew there were a lot of kids in Monroe County dealing with different type of abuse. What I didn’t know is that there were so many cases of neglect in our county.
2. The Truth of Senior Year: What No One Tells You About Your Senior Year
By Tonyeisha Brown
a. I like this article because everything you said about the stress of trying to keep up with the senior classwork and making sure you have the funds for all things Senior related like prom and yearbook are exactly how I feel. I like that you got opinions from other students.
3. Singer Breaks Silence: Mariah Carey’s Team Shuts Down New Year’s Eve Rumors
By Katherine Fuss
a. I really like how this article ended with Mariah Carey basically saying that she was done with this story. Most of the time victims send to Death because of the Bullies
4. How diverse is the business world?
By Taijanah Jackson
a. I like the article and how it uses Labor Department and census data. I wish more would have been said about the women who are a big minority in the workforce.
5. Local Business shut down due to mice infestation Bay and Goodman Pizza temporarily closed
By Rose Elliot
a. The story made me want to immediately read more after you referenced “Ratatouille”. Great Story!
6. The Truth Behind Final Year of High School
By Maria Morales
a. I like this article. It really hits home that SOTA is really not the place to be if you want to actually have a “Senior Experience” because I have also heard stories from seniors at different schools saying that they have classwork to keep up with but they have a lot of activities (i.e. pep rallies, trips, fun class assignments, etc.)
7. High school stereotypes you don’t ever hear about: RCSD students confess their thoughts about rival schools
By Alannah Scardino
a. Good perspective. Very interesting article. The school rivalry has been something that has been going on since my mom was in high school and even before her. My mom said it’s mostly because of sports and different gangs from back in the day.
8. Social media and it's politics: Social media has an impact on politics that's larger than ever before.
By Jacob Dillon
a. Good article. Helps you to understand how media, social media especially helps politicians and keeps voters informed.